Thank you so much for the incredible useful tips! I've been going back through my chapters just now and I see you have valid points here. There are huge chunks of text, and in some cases, there are even too many speech bubbles. I should definately cut a bit in the dialogues, and I'm even considering to do that for my older chapters as well, not only for the new ones. Someone already suggested that I might as well use the same picture more than once, with different texts. That might be a good solution as well, granted that I won't be using the same panel 10 times XD
I think I can blame it on the fact that I've been writing novels for years now, and I should have known doing a comic would be a different deal than writing huge texts. Ironic thing is that I'm acting like a vulture when it comes to show, don't tell in my novels, but I totally forgot about it once I was working on the comic. I should remember that there are differences, but similarities to writing a novel as well.
I watched the video and it is really helpful, thank you so much! Where could I find 'the understanding of comics', if I may ask? I'd love to dive deeper into the subject.
Toughen you up with all the burn wounds, eh? Nah, just kidding, Cyndaquil is awesome, but I tend to use water starters a lot. Totodile was no exception
Well, this means we are rivals then >:3